No matter what I do or say I know,
“ I love you too,” you just won’t say.
For 6 years long we’ve been together,
side-by-side we stood together.
Loving, laughing, living each day.
Those happy days now seem so far away.
I now fear the day is near
when goodbye is all we have left to say.
Hope is all I have to hold
the hope that you will want the same as I,
to love, to laugh, to live to hold.
Hope that tomorrow is clear and bright
and the nights are calm and right.
The hope that someday
you’ll reopen your heart to the world, to me,
and let the love pour in.
A contest entry
- Have you ever really loved a woman? by Myjoy.
1750 points, ended October 1, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow i like this alot. i really like the fisrt two lines the best. This is great and i like how it kinda seems peacful
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I really like this very much, so much emotions and sadness. I love the last two lines, great peice.
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Ooh I really like this it, oddly enough makes me feel calm and it seem as if it where almost gently written (if that makes sense
.) Very well written keep it up!
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Welcome to AllPortry!
This is full of emotion. It holds sadness but a possible glimpse of hope too. I think it would read better if you put it into lines instead of just a paragraph. Well done.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing.
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