I'm hiding in the holes of secrets,
Hoping to catch a glimpse of your
[Gorgeous] Smile.
These picture-perfect drawings
Are almost real enough to
Dream in;
Live in.
Thunder clouds Electrocute the breeze
With feelings of infinity,
Anchoring me to stitches of
H e a r t
B e a t s.
My finger prints are tattooed to your skin,
Like your breath is tattooed to my hopes,
And I'm holding on
So these laces of disparity won't tie us
Together,
Too much.
I see kisses in your Thoughts,
And I leave footprints behind
(So that if I ever get lost in your eyes,
You'll be able to find me
Once more.)
Balloons full of helium
Swell in my throat,
Lining my esophagus with
High pitched sighs
And blooming tulips,
Red like Lust.
I'm scribbling hearts and names
Underneath my finger nails,
And if you could live in my
Arms,
I'd build you a space.
These bridges are Looping over rivers
I've created of past
Aches and Pains,
And you're the base of the bridge,
Supporting everything in me.
I'm leaving holes in my heart
For you to climb into,
And the key is sitting on your chest;
Attached to the rolled up
Heart on my sleeve.
These dead butterflies in my stomach
Are like zombies;
Living again - Walking in the sunsets
Hidden in my rib cage.
Music notes are hidden in bottles,
Floating through the ocean,
And sun-stars are falling from the sky,
(Leaving a trail of rainbow dust in my
Thoughts.)
I'm cleaning the dust with a
rag made of sun(shine,)
And it'll sure (shine) like new when I'm done with it.
Your words are my shrine
Made of Love and Laughter,
And I'm keeping it away in the
Pockets of my soul.
I watch my hand as these
Kisses
&
Heart Throbs
Fall through my fingers,
And even though I should be worried;
I'm perfectly Okay.
[Because I know that you're underneath to catch
T H E M.]
Author notes
So I talked to my boyfriend today.
I was all worried about stuff, and I don't know. We kind of discussed it I guess,
and so now I'm not so worried anymore.
I really like him a lot.
I'm so glad that I'm where I am.
I know it hurt my ex to break up with him, but I'm so happy with Adam right now.
It's great. (:
I know you wanted a lot of "emotion" and "feeling" and when people think of emotion they think of intensity and pain,
but ... this is emotion and feeling. Or at least, it's what I'm feeling right now. (:
So.
I hope it's okay for you, Darling?!
<3 They Say [Shannon.]
A contest entry
- personal poetry. ❤ by aanika.
1147 points, ended September 13, 2008, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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'I'm leaving holes in my heart
For you to climb into,
And the key is sitting on your chest;
Attached to the rolled up
Heart on my sleeve.
These dead butterflies in my stomach
Are like zombies;
Living again - Walking in the sunsets
Hidden in my rib cage.
Music notes are hidden in bottles,
Floating through the ocean,
And sun-stars are falling from the sky,'
as you know, I love your imagery.
and this was no exception.
beautifulllll.
<3
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I'm glad that you like it. (:
<3
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"I'm scribbling hearts and names
Underneath my finger nails,"
-- That sounds incredibly painful.
Tell me about Adam <33333 -
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lmfao.
Ily.
Welllll, that's what I'll go through for love. ;D
Jaykay.
Well.
Maybe, Missy, if I could talk to you on the phone. >.>
My life is too complicated at this point to type out.
haha.
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of course it's okay for me !
this definitely has emotion and feeling.
anyways, I've gotta cut the comment short,
I'm not commenting on any poems until tomorrow
and I don't want to be unfair to everyone else (:
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your poems are always written so differently but i love it. it keeps me interested. =] good luck!
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Haha, what do you mean by that?
But thanks. (:
I'm so glad you enjoy my writing. <3 -
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I don't know how to explain it. Haha.
And your welcome. <3
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