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Sweet Dreams

Goodnight,
Sleep tight,
Don't let the bed bugs bite.

Go to sleep,
Count your sheep,
Go to sleep.

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Little thing I thought of for no reason.

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  • Slick99
    August 28, 2008

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    this is really cute!!! you should be really proud!!! have a nice day and keep writing!!! -slick


  • Engaged
    August 22, 2008
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    lol... this is really cool and it makes me sleepy! lol


  • Redeemed15
    August 21, 2008

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    Interesting Julia. Good (space) night

    Maybe on either the first or last line of the second stanza you could change it to sumthin else. Idk