Her outwardly look is unharmed,
untainted, so graceful and pure.
She looks as if she was serene,
and her happiness will perdure.
But it's all just a lie, a mask of deceit;
hiding behind the world.
She's a monster, a beast, evil in all ways,
just hidden in shape of a girl.
Disgusting and morbid, it lives around you.
Her happiness is like her sheath.
She hides her hatred and dark past,
that's all that lies beneath.
Her unquenched anger, supressed emotions,
are unseen by all the rest.
it's a mask, a skin tight paint,
that colors her inner mess.
Deprived and tortured, her soul screams out,
thrashing to be released.
She fights to be free, as she hides her needs.
That's how she tames her own beast.
Her feelings unknown, she's a plastic smile,
Her costume will never last her.
Her life is in shit, a bottomless pit.
She's nothing but an unwroken disaster.
Author notes
http://julioleite.deviantart.com/art/Girl-Hell-65987511
OPTION #3
I personally don't like the format or the lack of consistency of anything, but I am very short of time. I'm sorry
A contest entry
- AngelWithDarkWings & LadyDementia's 1 Year Anniversary Contest by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended September 11, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow! I expected nothing less from you! That was still very good even if rushed! Good luck in the constest!
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Nicely done... the dark elements shine and bring a rationale to this darkest of pictures...
Ken
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yo dude that is one fucked up chick. i know you said that you dont like it but i kinda do. its got a nice theme to it and it flows real nice.
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I like this, you have portrayed the picture very well, the imagery is very dark...I like the idea of it being her soul trying to break free. Neat! Thanks for entering and good luck
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