I've been thinking a lot lately...
There is something I should do.
There is only one problem,
It isn't really possible.
I had a strong feeling,
That maybe I should stop.
But that would kill me
Because I can't live without him.
He's a major part of my life,
And there is absolutely no way
That I could go even one month
Without seeing him once.
This guy is sweet and charming,
He's my knight in shining armor.
I keep thinking that he loves me still,
But now I'm not so sure.
I just want him to hold me close
And shower me with kisses.
He's the one person who keeps me happy,
And now I had a thought.
It hit me very strongly,
And one day I thought
"Maybe it's time to let go,
Wait, no nevermind..."
Author notes
KokoluvsDaniel
I chose it for obvious reasons - I love Daniel and I don't want people to know my real name, so I chose Koko...
Ummm I don't give out my name usually so I'll send it through a message - hope it's ok?
I wouldn't change it for the world because it fits me (idk why it just does)
14
Love Country
Blue or Red
Don't really have a favorite Hollywood star
Too many movies to choose from, but I'll go with Stick It
Love poetry
Freeverse
Will post a like here later - g2g
I'm your sis already... 
Hopefully! lol 
Of course I know you!
I love gummy worms
A contest entry
- AP Familyyy :] by innocence jaded.xx.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you like it? Let me know if there's anything to fix!
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Bandit appreciation!
Thank you for this fine contribution to The Poetic Bandits reading list
~Lilac
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Romance lost poem!
Very apt title and well executed poem! I get tired of all of the poems of this genre, but this one is very good! Your imagery is strong as are your emotions! I like the last stanza & the last line, especially! Good work, poet!
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This is a very emotive poem - I like the way you express yourself and create a musing kind of tone
the only thing that I picked up on is that 'nevermind' is actually two words 
thank you for sharing 
I enjoyed this piece!
Keep writing
Pol
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Wonderfully penned; I like the deep emotions expressed in this and the flow
Great poem!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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You did a good job expressing your feelings for your guy, and a nice bit of free verse also,
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well done my friend, tis a well written well thought out love poem about the thoughts that us when it might be time to let go.
May the stars light your path.
DW
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A heartfelt write on a most intense love. Well done...alby
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this piece really shows the truth of girls who care too much and just are surrounded by questions of what to do great job
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Ummm, is that supposed to mean something? Cuz if it is, then I'm sorry to say that I take offense with the care too much part - there is no such thing as caring too much in my opinion... And i'm not surrounded by questions of what to do... I can't really do anything because we aren't 16 yet... and there really isn't a question about moving on, I thought that was clarified at the end. I love Daniel and I always will...
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Hahaha, aw, I loved this ! & yes, you are my sister already, but I definitely enjoyed reading your poem & finding out more about you. Woot. I loved the poem, as it was very powerful & emotionally deep, & I have to agree with your color choices. Those are two of my faves
haha. And kudos to you for loving gummy worms. You rock socks. lol. Keep it up & thanks for enteringgg! Good luck !
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