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The color of Demolition never seemed so vivid.

And then the concrete collides with the lining of your jaw
oh and no amount of endorphins will release you from the fire wretched pain,
you'll suffocate on the marrow of the curb that you were so fortunate to swallow.
it's the sound of meager ribs splintering beneath my sadistic feet.
It's the smell of copper induced blood occupying shattered veins.

It my dear,
it is my repulsion for your soul.

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  • harrypotter
    August 22, 2008

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    This is BRUTAL and I must say that even though it is really well written, it doesn't fit within the things I am looking for in this contest...It actually reminds me of an episode of "Scarred"