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Sanity

I feel the water
A sea of life and sanity
It is time to let go
And to start loving me
Now is the time
The time to breath
Even when all seems hopeless
And I am helpless
I know I'll pull through
Because I have all of you

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Something I wrote in placement dedicated to my family! Hope you like it!

Tell me the truth but be kind

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  • cokacolacowpok
    August 26, 2008
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    This to shall pass my dear. Letting go the bad and bringing the happiness back in your life will be an enlightment for you to proceed on in life. Having your family to love you is the most important thing for such a young person. They will be there for eternity standing by you and getting you through your many painful feelings.
    Brian


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    Made me cry tears of joy!

    slowly it seems the heart mends....
    and yours is GENUINE BEAUTY TO BEHOLD...
    i remember after a particularly cruel
    beating by my Dad...I was 9 years old...
    i looked into
    the mirror in my room...and said to myself outloud;

    DONT you EVER stop believing in YOU..I love you...and
    we're going to find a way to make this stop!
    It took me almost another year...but mightily I did!

    I actually could feel all of heaven surround me with
    strength and I could hear the words clearly:
    my voice saying to my weeping heart...I am never going
    to stop believing in you..I love you!

    that's your Innervoice..write with it...it will continue to strengthen you!
    Yours is genuine beauty and strength
    to BEHOLD!
    much love,
    ears/poetic granny
    Positive self-talk..works!
    My own grief counselor taught me to do it boldly!
    and p.s. it helped me to understand, that most of
    the problems that I was confronted with it...were
    not mine to pick up....it did not have my name on it!
    Do not breathe in other peoples trash, that is theirs
    to wrestle with!

  • Broken-Bones
    August 20, 2008

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    I loved this, I can also relate to this. I loved the ending and the hope that comes from the love you share. You put so eloquantly how sometimes our love ones save us, quite often unknowingly. This was a lovely write x