Increasing pain
Though-out my body
And all I find
Is nothing but hate
You put the pain
Back in hurt
So tell me why I love it?
Author notes
H.U.R.T.
Wow, I love the prompt...
A contest entry
- H.U.R.T. by Redeemed15.
300 points, ended August 20, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm trying to get better: Comments?
Comments
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very good
and powerful in few words
i dont really like rhyme
but this is nicely done! -
This was great, it is amazing the strength of the emotions you convey in so few words. I especially loved the final three lines and loved how you ended on a question, I often find myself wondering the same thing. I thought your take on the prompt was great and you mananged to create a wonderful piece from it. Nice work x
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Heh
Thank you. I am truly happy you liked my poem and it's message.
It was kinda a dedication, so I should've added that in my notes.
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Thank you. And, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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