You may have left me,
But my heart had left you,
Long before, the guarantee,
That you would bid adieu,
Leave me there, standing,
All alone in the rain,
But I stuck the landing,
And pulled through the pain.
You can't admit that you were wrong,
That I could have done better,
Than your shallow self, all along.
Why was I so stupidly blind?
Why did you try to cover,
And hide your true mind?
That you were not my lover.
Author notes
Yeah, too bad the guy I wrote it for can't read it.
Comments
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this is really good!!! your rhyming was good and you should enter this in a contest sometime... -slick99
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You did good with the rhyme, I didn't even notice it till reading this poem out loud.
This seems to be a very bitter poem. I would not suggest giving it to him, but if you still want to I'm sure you could write it out, or type in in a typewriter front, cut it to strips and glue them onto a picture (like something you would find on postsecret) and then slip your anonymous poem under his windshield, or mail it to him, or slip it under his welcome mat.
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I like it
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Ok...
-You could center align it
Other than that , AWESOME POEM. He should read it.
Great background for it!
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