Breathtaking in the morning light
Everything I ever desired
Amazingly sexy in her old blue jeans
Utterly Tantalizing as her smile fills her eyes
Totally capturing my soul
Impossible to ever forget
Full of zest for all things good.
Unaware of her Beauty; she knows not vanity
Loyal and Loving to the end of time.
A contest entry
- Beautiful. by JinSays.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sweet! Thankyou for entering.
I loved the devotion you display.
Very nice. Excellent take, thank you,
Jin
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I loved this, it seemed truely romantic and it was easy to feel the affection. I could certainly imagine this beauty but I like the way that you describe a kind of understated attractiveness. I loved the line "Utterly Tantalizing as her smile fills her eyes", the detail there really conveyed a lot of emotion and made me imagine those eye filling smiles I once knew in a loved one. Beautiful x
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