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Unfinished.

The sun shines through the dusty window,
The coffee sloshes in the mug,
Your hair never falls the right way,
And you're never sure of the right words,
Yep.  Just another day.

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  • IceDrgn4
    August 20, 2008

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    Since it's unfinished all I'll say is, the shines threw me off. I had to re-read that part like 3 times to get on track. Is there a word missing there?