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Your Touch

When you touch me I melt under your hands sending a sensation from my nose to my toes.
My body shivers and my mind slowly empties out.
I look into your blue eyes sparkling like a midnight sky as you stare into my eyes trying to discover everything I feel but the longer I stare the farther I drift as if I was floating in the ocean and all my worries sink to the very bottom where no one has to deal with them any longer.
All that was left was just a you & a me...
....like it was suppose to be

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  • aanika
    August 28, 2008
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    last warning: screen name in authors notes
    or I'll DQ.


  • aanika
    August 21, 2008
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    screen name in author's notes please
    I'll comment for real later.