All i wanna do is hold you in my arms till you drift asleep
Hold you really tight when you start to weep
Every single night when i fell asleep
I wonder if she knows how much i really care
That i will always be there to hold her in my arms
That i will try and be the man she has always wanted in her life
Of every waking hour to every sleeping minute i will be there
To show you that i do truly care about you and life we are going to have
This is my solemn vow to never let you go and to have you for always and forever right by my side till we shall past into another world of love and care.
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Written January 15th, 2004
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And those are the kinds of vows to have and to hold on to. It's a worthy goal to want to cherish and be with one person for your whole life, I hope it is working out.
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If your so sick of reading these hopelessly-devoted-to-you type of poems...then stay away from the love section. So people write what's in their heart, and thatz what he did. If he so choses...there is no such thing as unoriginal poetry. Everyone's feelings are their own...you can't change how a person feels...if he feels love, then that is what he's going to write about....
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How about you vow never to write something as painfully unoriginal as this again. No, I'm being harsh. Sorry dead end road it's just me, I'm just sick of reading these hopelessly-devoted-to-you type poems.
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Jarrod, she knows exactly how much you love her. It's something that isn't hard to see either! You two are so cute together and everytime I'm around you I can't help but think how "perfect" you guys are together. I wish you both all the happiness in the world and you will always be my Doctor Plump and my girlie Jemmy!
Luv ya both! *sonya*
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aww this is so sweet, Im so happy for both of u. THis poem flows so well, and the meaning so beautiful. COngratulations. Luves ME
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love it!!
OMGosh I love the poem!! and the reply
lol sorry... ok well lol like I was saying. It was really full of emotion and you really made the poem feel something. Ok I sound crazy... well love your poem! lol
hugs and kisses
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the above is sweet...just as good as the poem
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Baby, I love you so much...and I do know how much you love me...I just hope you are making the right decision and know that I'm the one u want to be with forever. You'll have my heart untill our dying day... I refuse to give you up...you're everything to me, and I know that I want u to be my husband. Just remember that forever and ever I'll always love you, and I'll always be here for you to talk to or to just hold. Just don't rub my nose I don't wanna sleep a moment if you're laying next to me...lol...I love you baby...
I love you everything and more...
~*Jenn 
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