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What Hurts The Most

Wilted roses
all that's left is thorns
and my broken heart
is still left beating
torn open on the ground

Don't you know how much you meant
to me?
I think you're just to blind to see.
This is what hurts the most
is that you said you loved me
and then you turn away


How can you just walk away?
like you haven't hurt me
there's not much I can do
to explain how hurt  I feel

I thought you loved me
I guess I was wrong

Author notes

woahdreambig led zepplin
best i could do with what hurts the most hope you like it.

if you like broadway music please enter my broadway song inspired 2 contest and get your friends to enter as well.
thanks for the fun contest

ps not about anyboy or anything that happened to me. i just went with what i knew the song was about.

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  • PoetryGirl26
    September 30, 2008

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    I liked this becuase it relates losely to the song but doesn't really steal any words or lines directly from it! good job!