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Mindless

I'ts only mindless you know.
Those kind of things and how they work.
And how they end.
But those are always the best kinds.
The mindless ones-
the ones that just happen by themselves through time and utter patience.
it's always so great to see the outcome and think
How could something so perfect as this happen mindlessly or accidental?
But we just have to accept it
Because thats how it works.
Mindlessly.
We're not allowed to search or plan because it won't be the same.

You'll never find it if your looking for it.

And the people who Do search and plan rarely turn out well
In fact they never do
So why do people condemn themselves to search?
Obviously if it isn't working now- it never will
But if you think about it
the mindless ones out there are few
while the searchers are many
Who knew what would happen and to see the bitter result and unfairness of a mindless one being dragged in by a Searcher is to cry for.
All I beg of you is to try to feel it
In these situations be mindless
and let fate and destiny fulfill its duty and flow into you spontaneously
You'll see the aftermath
And I promise you that-

That is to dance for.

Author notes

Again another very rough draft. Straight from the journal. Unedited. Not fixed. Still a lot of rough spots. That's why it's called a rough draft o.O I hope you like it. It was another venting moment for me. =P I know prolly a lot of you won't agree to this, cause really I've never been in love. I don't know how it is. But just tell me what you think. Please?

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    I think I get your basic premise that love comes natural. That can be true, but sometimes you have to fight tooth & nail to get it. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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