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Feeding Dogs

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peeling tin
unveils scent of liver
stampeding paws

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As soon as the can opens...they know. They could be in Canada. They would hear... and they would come.

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  • j i n gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    no kidding, huh?
    Excellent.
    jin


  • SatuRn Grotesk
    September 11, 2008

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    ::giggles::

    Stupid muts. lol.

    ::shrugs::
    I found this to be very cute and imagainative. I don't think I could write a Haiku. I have too much to say. A haiku would just hinder me. LOL

    • yukitosumi silver member
      September 12, 2008
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      Lol yeah I find that my short attention span and lack of emotional angst has driven me to japanese forms of poetry. That way I can just make observations about stuff.

      Best,
      El
  • Broken-Bones
    August 20, 2008

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    They do know instantly don't they?! This is a wonderful poem crafted from a simple but lovely observation. This was a clever and unique little piece. Good work x