Dear you,
I know you know. I know it from the look in your eyes...
I know you know my little secret. It's been torturing me
for days. I know you know I have this insane throbbing
feeling in the pit of my stomach, and an odd ache in my
heart when I can't see you. You know I have a crush on you.
I mean, it is kind of obvious. When I saw you at the beach yesterday,
I just couldn't look away. When I tried, I just had to
look back again. It was like my neck and my heart were
teaming up, telling me not to look away. I know you know.
Sincerely,
You Know Who
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Kiwikrazi37
My Wednesday Write! (Write a letter to someone)
A contest entry
- Are you up for a challenge? by innocence jaded.xx.
4200 points, ended September 8, 2008, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Wonderful
Haven't we all had one of those? The secret crush that every one knows about, including the crush himself....a lovely write!
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i love this poem and i know you know it. LOL
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Oooh, I really liked this ! Thanks for the entry, ahah, I know this feeling all too well, and you penned infatuation & lust perfectly. Incredible write. Keep it up ! ♥
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that is funny. kinda of the YOU KNOW WHO parts... good luck in the contest, and have a nice day!!! -slick99
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