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Enjoy This Season

Withering grass of this season
with your abundance of green,
take advantage of Today -
Contribute to this Earthly scene.

Enjoy your present strength;
ignore worries of the past.
Let the distant failures fade
and let sweeter memories last.

Be true to yourself always,
standing tall and strong.
Focus on your own meadows and…
Learn to hum to Life’s song.


Learn more about me and my poetry at:
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  • Jepardy
    April 5

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    Hope, life, spring, love. So deep and yet so simple at the same time. This is a really nice piece and thank you for sharing it in my contest.


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4

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    Wonderful job! I love the simplicity and flow. Grass is so lovely, even though itches sooo much! Lolz Thank you for entering, and good luck! Great piece

    ♥ Kathraina


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    why not..? one should.....well done...I love it..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece in my contest...

  • goalsv
    August 20, 2008

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    I like it, a very good way to show hope in our life by using grass as a metephor.I love the last two lines they just finish it off so perfectly. Makes you want to hum a tune.