Oh God
I am truly taken aback
while envisioning the
clouds in the sky
which you form
storing the
voluminous water in it
I respond in mumbling words:
"how you do that? how you do that ?"
Oh God..
Author notes
Image by Chelsea Rainford
option No..5
I know you will say that the clouds are formed by the water cycle but still I do have a question? who created this system of the water cycle? who..and yes how..?
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Absolutely beautiful picture!
Stunning piece.
I'm sure this is a question
that many ask themselves.
I have found my self a time or two
asking that very same question.
And upon that question,
I find myself asking many more.
This piece is so powerful
and so beautiful.
Keep your pen flowing my friend
You are a very talented poet.
Much Luv & Respect!
TT
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I would say mumbling for all the right reasons, kind of taken back with this exceptional view
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questions indeed
we should all marvel at how the world works,no matter how much sciece finds, there are always more questions.Somebody must have started it all. i like this poemit poses questions -
This is stunning.
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The beauty revealed is far more deeply appreciated, when the eye is taken, beyond the easy cerebral habits of categorisation and limited 'knowing'.
Thank you for the reminder of such transporting and freeing invitation to the miraculous all around us.
Sol
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I like the thoughtful musing tone of the words...I too am often awed by the wonders of the created world. I cannot fully understand their workings or beginnings, yet I can fully appreciate their beauty. As I can appreciate the beauty of this poem of yours. Best wishes in this contest. Peace, Rhonda
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excellent
how do you do this! how do you do this!
oh, spiritual poet - the beauty of God's creations is reflected in your poetry, as always. congrats and best regards!!!
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I often am amazed at all God creations,
as it always moves in seemingly effortless motion.
it is always a feeling of awe.
exquisite sir
God bless...
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A beautiful piece of spiritual poetry. Love the softness of your perfectly chosen words. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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is easy to do once you know the answer, and I think you already do. wonderful poem, and I wish you luck in the contest
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