Tuckered out and tired
What else can I say?
Speeding everywhere
I’ve been chasing her all day.
Purring each time she passed
Made my engine rev and roar.
Teasing she’d zoom right by.
So the pedal I did floor.
Blowing a kiss and winking
Made my heart race even more.
Making me even more determined
Than I was seconds before.
On and on I chased her
Faster and faster we did go.
Till she ran right out of gas,
Stopping she smiled and said “hello”.
“Well now that you have caught me
What else can I say”?
Should you offer me a ride
I’ll do the same but in the hay.
A contest entry
- Running On Empty by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended August 27, 2008, 15 entries
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The ending had me cracking up. Thanks for the giggles hun. Best of luck to you in the contest. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to enter. I hope it proved to be an enjoyable experience and challenge for you. 
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Hey kimberly, you know me! I always have fun. Thanks.
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Classic!! Ahh the cat and mouse chase of man and woman!!
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Thanks kiwi.
What can be more fun.
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Well your opening and closing lines would seem to indicate that there may be disappointment in the offing. The ending surprised me in that I wasn't expecting the expected. Does that make sense? This made me smile!
~woof
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Thanks for a great comment K-9. I'm glad it made you smile.
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WONDERFUL WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my friend, This was a delight to read this moirning. I sure needed a smile today and this sure did the trick. Best of luck. Great rhyming and flow and GREAT poem!!
Take care,
Sandy
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Sandy if it made you smile then I'm a winner already! I'm glad it made you feel better.
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Going for a spin
Oh I liked this one very much as well. The chase... but gawd don't we live for the chase!
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The chase is fun, but the catch is even better!
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!
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