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The Ending

Her fingers gently caressing his wounds
Too deep this time to turn back
She holds onto him for the last time
He speaks softly into her ear

"My love, I never wanted it to end this way"

She leans back, tears flooding
She grabs his hand and holds it close to her face
The warmth of his blood she feel on her lips
Soon it will be cold

His body becomes heavier
His breathing subsides
Her eyes widen
Her grip tightens

She knows he is gone
But still close she holds his body
his soul
her heart

the night's breeze is becoming colder
Clouds covering his limelight
covering there tragedy
Hiding them like they had been accustomed 

The life she preffered 

The life he hated

 

Now alone she feels it

She feels the love that has now left her

Left her...

alone

scared

cold

lost

 

BROKEN....

 

 

 

 

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  • Pyragus
    August 23, 2008

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    so broken, I cannot be revived, I sleep in the cold stone state, wandering past each dream each nightmare, what day what hour will it all pass, leaving my dried up and alone, unloved unwanted, the first child in a line of dead children, I drown


  • BabyGurlz
    August 20, 2008
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    Tabatha

    I love this poem...favorite part is its almost vampric. Good job hun


  • JBudRos
    August 20, 2008
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    Yes you know who you are and you will feel my love after I'm gone...