Contemplate the sky;
ever-changing though constant,
wondrous and familiar,
ride on thoughts
float on dreams
transcend
all earthly affairs.
Look skyward -
and be
amazed!
In a list
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - 15 entries! prompt inspired by etoile.
458 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Contemplate the sky;
ever-changing though constant,
wondrous and familiar
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i really liked those lines; they made me think
great take on the prompt!
thanks for entering and goodluck
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Another wonderful write makes me want to look to the sky and soke it all in,
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz -
This made me smile. Like many of your poems, it left me with a calm feeling of contentment. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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Excellent feeling within this short composition.
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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Wonderful!
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This has a whimsical feel...and yes, the sky is truly amazing
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I am.
Hilly xxx
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well
Bright skys and the beauty of life. Gentle intimate moments and a kiss that says...Your are forever.
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