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HW...Romance

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warm evenings and sultry breezes

 

encourage my mood to love

 

you are invited to join me

 

and become my turtledove

 

champagne and chocolate

 

will be served to you in style

 

while satisfying your palate

 

influencing romance all the while

 

 

 

join me on the veranda

 

amid the candlelight and stars

 

tell me that you desire me

 

encompassing Venus along with Mars

 

hold me close to you my love

 

while in dance in sultry breeze

 

ask me if I will marry you

 

I answer yes to you on bended knee

 

 

 

 

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  • onesugar gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    A beautiful feeling of love and romance flows from this page as the story unfolds.

    A pleasure to read

    Good luck and thank you for entering

    ~sugar~


  • apropos
    August 21, 2008
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    very romantic!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery within this well written composition.
    Great flow of the rhyming verse!
    Well Done!


  • arafura gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Sweet story of love and romance. Well done!