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Entropy

he's dumped his clothes in the corner again.
mom said she isn't cleaning his room anymore.
next week:
there's a huge pile of dirty clothes in the corner.
it smells funny.
eww!
is that a sandwich?
that was what mom prepared last week!
eww!
next week:
his room smells really weird.
i'm not going in there anymore.
mom's looking for his polo.
he needs to wear it for the wedding on saturday.
mom has to look for it because he won't.
she opens the door:
AAAAHHH!!!!!
ouch. that scream hurt my ears.
his room reminds me of a dump site.
eww.
is this what the guy in the environmental show talking about?
is this what my science teacher was talking about?
yeah.
i think it is.
entropy ain't pretty.

Author notes

An old, old poem I wrote on entropy.

I barely even remember the concept of entropy.

Dance with me?

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