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The Inner Dream

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A solitary place for one
for soul to rest in peace
encased within simplicity
where dreams may be released.

Protected by the waters calm
as zephyrs whisper through
with ripples lapping gently
and fresh dreams make their debut.

Foundations sturdy throughout time
where naught shall penetrate
with confidence each dream unfolds
that none may desecrate.

This sentinel alert to all
that seek out to destroy
where battlements of past experience
the darkness shall deploy.

Awaiting for the one in grace
to crumble ancient walls
and dreams are shared forever
walking loves most blessed halls.


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Picture Credit - Chelsea Rainford

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  • February Moon gold member
    August 28, 2008
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    Lovely.


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 21, 2008

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    butiful mum

    good luck in the contest

    xxx judie xxx


  • Rovingone gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    My, that is a lot of inspiration from such a spartan picture prompt. It shows a great deal of creativity flows through your mind. You see a lot in this scene. And, the description of your thoughts is classic. Very intuitive piece.