Sensual whispers caress
nape of neck
breathed tones of
openness, trust, honesty, respect
laced together
sensations ablaze
passions charged
tender fingers trace
curves of rapture
hearts quicken pace
being together
nothing can abate
dancing to a rhythm
made for two
a crescendo of
electricity pushes through
lingering, peaceful
in contented bliss
no words are needed
lips brush lips
caring arms orbit
individual forms
two souls committed
weather many storms
sharing dreams
happiness, laughter, tears
making treasured memories
over many years
finding a freedom
being allowed to grow
soul mates united
for eternity will know
within each others arms
lies a beautiful place - home
Author notes
I love you xxx
love
want
desire
fire
hold
kiss
embrace
romance/romantic, etc
you/your/thy, etc
me/my/mine, etc
us
we
flower/rose/daisy, etc
moon
emotion
A poem without the above words in.
A contest entry
- Forbidden Words of Love by Mr..
750 points, ended September 1, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lovely poem all the more amazing ,for not using those
words.loved it, best wishes Carl.
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Thank you carl, appreciate you reading.
All the best
~sugar~
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Anti-word bank
Obviously, this is your love. We write in areas that we are strong and connect to. This is where you shine! Keep up the good work. -
An amazing anti word bank. This speaks of love and passion. So beautifully done. It is always a pleasure to catch up with your writing.
All the best
Emma
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Nice.
One of your best love poems ever, sis. Great passion expressed here. Fine work, sis.
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Thanks bro.
Glad you enjoyed this one
~sugar~
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Aww I adore this poem
So much feelings of love overflowing and the place to treasure, being at home together.
Best wishes hun in the contest
Julie x
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Thank you Julie
always a pleasure, valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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I got a wondrous vision while reading this, no pic necessary. And wait, let's see, did you really avoid all those words?
Good job, honey.
Love, B
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Thank you B for your lovely comment, it is good to see you. Yes I did manage not to use any of those words and it wasn't easy. LOL!!
It is always a pleasure to have you read.
Love, ~sugar~
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!
From what I can see you kept out all of the words above and still managed to pen a beautiful poem about love 'sweet' love! I particularly liked the flow and rhyme in the following lines -
dancing to a rhythm
made for two
a crescendo of
electricity pushes through
You've had the best teacher in the flow of poetry in rhyme on AP - and HE says go to the head of the class and collect your platinum star! Keep up the wonderful work, me beautiful friend - and - as always - I'll be back to enjoy them once again.
Good Luck in the contest and with every boulevard and avenue you pursue and with everything that you say and do.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Earl you are a sweetheart, thank you for your constant support. Always leaving fab comments to spur me on. You are a wonderful friend...Now who is this teacher of mine??? LOL!!! It can't be you...don't want ya head getting to big (That's the one on ya shoulders by the way) LMAO!
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Excellent poem!
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Thank you Mr.
~sugar~
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Well done!
A denial 'word bank' that is a challenge that most poets wouldn't attempt. Michelle looks like you rose up to the task.
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I tried...I have seen them before and not attempted them...I felt up to the challenge today.
Appreciate you reading as always
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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