Just whisper a prayer when you're lonely
Send it straight to the Master's Ear
He'll answer with words that are only
Meant just for your ears to hear
Whisper a prayer, when your heart is breaking
When the load seems too heavy to bear,
There are your answers, just for the taking
When you go to the Master in prayer
There's love in abundance for every tear
There's kindness for you every day
The Master will take away your fear
He'll walk with you all of Life's way
So share all your joy and your sorrow
He's there for you every day
Don't worry about your tomorrow
He's only a Whisper away.
-Katie Lazette- 04-16-2000
A contest entry
- Your absolute BEST! (1,009 points, winner takes all) by AutumnsFlame.
1858 points, ended December 5, 2008, 31 entries
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I think this is really good all except for the last stanza. There was too few sylabols in it, so it didn't fit with the rest of the poem, which had long lines. Thank you for entering my contest... You're good enough to be kept in it! Congradulations on not getting DQed!
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he is indeed only a whisper away, how blessed are we,
perfect rhyme with a truthful message
God bless my friend...
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Thank you Pisces rinbow. So glad my poem has blessed you. Take care of you. Katie
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"only a whisper away" how awesome is that? This is a truly beautiful piece of poetry. A blessing to have read it. So glad you shared it with us. Excellent, loving and uplifting.
Sam
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Thank you Samplette, so glad you received a blessing from my poem. Praise the Lord..Kaite
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UMM
um, your poem encouraged me to believe in life again, and trust in lord again, great write and wonderfully pieced together. Love it
***HUGS***
thelegend
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Here's a big hug back to you. Praise the Lord, I am happy my poem has encouraged you. God bless you. Katie
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This is a really good poem. It is so comforting to us to know that help for anything we encounter in life is just a prayer away. It doesn't matter if the whole world has left us behind; God will always be there for us. Great job!
Don't worry about your tomorrow
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Thank you PianoMan for your kind comment. I am pleased you like my poem. Hope it gave you comfort...Katie
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Superb
An inspiring write. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, very well done.
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Thank you Trafaiger679Curious for reading my poem and for you lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed it...Katie
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You are quite welcome.
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Another wonderful poem!!! I'm so glad I started reading more of your poems.
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Thank you daviscth. I am glad you enjoyed this one also. Take care and God Bless you..Katie
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This was so beautiful and full of hope. I liked it a lot, especially the second stanza.
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Thank you Falling Star. So glad you enjoyed my poem..Katie
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A gentle, beautiful poem, full of hope.
So share all your joy and your sorrow
He's there for you every day
Don't worry about your tomorrow
He's only a Whisper away
I particularly loved the last stanza. Well done.
Slayer
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Thank you Slayer, glad you enjoyed this poem. God bless you. Katie
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