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Wonderful Sun's Wise Power

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O, wonderful sun with your wise power,

explain to me the sense of life,

can I become a genius in less than an hour?''

The spirit of His power listened, smiled then spoke:

''The ozone layer is getting strict,

There are many strange winds blowing upon the earth,

You stay faithful to the universal truth of eternal life,

And tell the ardencey rose:

That it needs to be closed

Inside the crucified violin,

As the violin is enclosed inside the rose...

When the camel will pass through the hole of a needle,

When nature will again live beneath the rainbow-

come out of the violin and trill, sing free,

That is the time the song will be dear.''



And the spirit of the wonderful Son...

Arose, opened the violin

And accepted the firebird into its depths,

And the song kept silent,

Kaisa...

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Christ is in me and I am in Him.

If my writing makes no sence it means that there are writings about sence

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  • myrataal silver member
    August 23, 2008

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    It is good to be on your page ...

    with its glow of sight and of Light. Thank you so much, Judy, for a soothing poem of beauty.

    Love
    Myra


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Lovely Truth!

    It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than it is a rich man to enter the kingdom of God. I like how you were inspired by the picture sweet one. I enjoy reading you, and the light with much insight you share here from your soul. Back then, the eye of a needle represented how a camel would have to bow on all fours just to crawl, inch it's way through the eye of the needle, which looked like a key hole, and the camel would have to go through just right to fit. We must remain humble I believe that message means. Thanks for sharing you, truth. All the best always.

    -Timothy


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    lovely very soulful wisdom here my friend

    your metaphors are perfect

    lovely creation

    God bless...

  • Bob Fox silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Wow

    And only a mere impossibilty? Perhaps such a deep look into the universe is needed by many . We the shallow think we are above. But oh we are at times so below. Deep write from a very deep poet. But I think I know where you are coming from.

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