And I remember the day
You told me he'd been born
And the days which followed
Then the day we all lost him
We didn't just lose him that day
I lost you along with him
All the tears you cried
And the patience I learnt to have
I fought so hard
Fought so so hard
To save us
To save this friendship
The first ever arguements
We'd had in our friendship
The ones where I realised
You'd just stopped caring
The months which followed
Where we didn't say a word
And the ways we avoided each other
I lost my bestfriend when he died.
Author notes
Explanation; last November my ex best friend's mum gave pregnant to a verrry premature little boy and he unfortunately only survived 3days 
but after my friend's brother died, I lost her too as the death put a brick wall inbetween us and we stopped talked at all for about 6months up until recently.
A contest entry
- When Things Fall Apart by reckless abandon.
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Comments
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It's sad when things like this happen... Losing people sucks noodles
Good write hun
~lae xo
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I really hope its not too late to fix things. You've put your thoughts to words very well. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Touching
Very strong and emotional. Love it!
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