Sin is accusation,
by self appointed gods,
judgemental deprication,
made as Homer nods.
Who are you to judge me ?
What gives you that right ?
Where you guided by your selfishness,
or a false, deceptive light.
There is no sin, just people,
differing in thought,
trying to find salvation,
in what other sinners taught.
The moral stance, the written word,
plagiarised as true.
So spare me condemnation,
as I sin so do you..
A contest entry
- ~Do Still Not Know What Sin Is~ by SoulfulBubbles.
300 points, ended October 2, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the ending,
I believe your right selfishness is what causes conflict,
to force personal beliefs on others, do this or...
excellent write my friend
God bless...
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i kinda wana hear more and in more detail tho.
oh and these are some awesome lines
"The moral stance, the written word,
plagiarized as true.
So spare me condemnation,
as I sin so do you.."
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thanks for entering -
hehe i liked this, i like the ideas and how you referenced to gods and homer, and i relate to this.
congrats your a finalist
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