The room lights up
When you walk inside
Will they ever know
The beauty you hide
Will you ever see
The art in you
Will you ever know
What to do
We will always be here
For you forever and ever
If you ever need to talk
We will leave you never
You can beat this
We know you will
You can do anything you want to do
Even climb the highest hill
We love you lots
Don’t ever forget that Jay*
If you ever get lonely
You can call me or Miss Day*
It won’t be long
Before we see you again
We will send you lots of letters
Until then
We love you lots
And we’ll be here until the end
Don’t ever forget that
My beautiful friend
Author notes
This is about my friend who is going through a rough time
*names have been changed
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is very nice
and it does give hope
something that i need a lot of
it was a very nice piece
to write for a friend who needs help with things
i loved it all
thank you and good luck -
Very nice write for your friend, everyone needs to know they have someone on their side. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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You are a good, loyal friend and Jay is lucky to have you. Keep sending her those positive vibes.
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I like this write. It's very touching and very beautiful.
"The room lights up
When you walk inside
Will they ever know
The beauty you hide"
I like that.
Your words are very pretty. ^_^ Thank you for entering.
-Lily♥ -
this is really nice and especially so since it is for a friend. The rhyme and flow are good. thank you for entering. I hope it helps your friend, they are lucky to have a friend like you.
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Before we see you again
We will send you lots of letters
Until then
We love you lots
And we’ll be here until the end
very touching.
you are very sweet for dedicating this to your friend
best of luck in the contests. -
I love this!!! Very inspirational! I think your friend will be very moved by this and also feel very special to you! AHHH lol I just really think that you're friend will be so lucky to read this. You are a great friend!
Keep on writing,
Alex -
its beautiful! just like your friend must be... for you to write this about someone, that someone must be a really special person makes me happy knowing people still have those people around them. good job
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This is a sweet write for your friend. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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