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Weapon of Mass Destruction




Locked away are hidden memories,
breeding by the close quarters;
undeniably they are coming.

Who is this I speak of?

Why, just look around you,
its the business man,
the pregnant women
and yes, of coarse -
the loving grandmother.

All caught up
in their own little worlds,
so much so that they don't see it,
the minds which pay no attention...

 

 

 

...and seems to kill,

no target, but just us.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

" Do You Know what sin is?
its not eating the fruit of wisdom.
Do you know what sin is?
Its not listening to snake's honey-laced words.
Do You still not know what sin is?
That would be your sin.
-Fredica bernkastal"



Sin is sin,
only if we are ignorant....



I hope this is psychology enough for you...its some what cryptic for effect and I'm curious to who will understand where I'm coming from...

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  • Lagrimas
    August 20, 2008
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    Weapon of Mass Destruction

    You are a WMD!!!! lol good luck to ya sis...


  • SoulfulBubbles
    August 20, 2008

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    and your " what to do in an insane world" reminded me of this quote which u may or may not find interesting

    "In A Insane world
    the sane are seen as
    Mad
    and the insane appear
    to be sane"
    Kurosawa.



    and for your piece
    I love it as whole
    and " yes, of coarse -
    the loving grandmother."

    and the last stanza really struck hard


    "All caught up
    in their own little worlds,
    so much so that they don't see it,
    the minds which pay no attention..."



  • SoulfulBubbles
    August 20, 2008
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    ooo damn this is good,

    congrats your a finalist