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I wont let go.

trust me.
i wont let go
i wont ever let go.

if i let go you wont ever come back
you cry at night
and i cant stop you
your gone for now
and i cant help it

it hurts
but i know it hurts you more
i love him
but i know you love him more

trust me.
i wont let go
i wont ever let go.

the crash left him dead
it also took your life.
i found you on the floor screaming his name
tears pored from your eyes
your face was beat red
shaking...
i drop to my knees and squeeze your hand

trust me.
i wont let go
i wont ever let go.

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  • Ntagatf
    August 20, 2008

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    wow

    Very Powerful, i love this. Almost made me cry, and it sent a chill through my body. Thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck, keep up the great work!!!