Did you know that I love you?
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And that I'm going crazy without you?
That I keep thinking of you,
And lay awake every night,
Trying to think of a way,
To make you love me again.
I want you.
I can't stop thinking of you,
Your driving me insane,
And I'm beginning to reach breaking point,
Your torturing me,
It's like you have my heart,
In your hand and your squeezing it hard.
Can't you see what you do to me?
Can you hear my heart scream for you?
It cries in the night,
Feeling so empty and alone,
Because you don't want it anymore,
But no matter what,
It will always belong to you.
......
Did you know that I love you?
............"yes"
Author notes
He is driving me insane, but I'm not waiting around anymore... Either he love's me and I'll chase him...Or he doesn't and he'll break me
A contest entry
- Darkness and Love, Demons above by AbandonedAngel.
350 points, ended September 19, 2008, 32 entries
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i feel like this........ pretty amazing poem....... i dont know what else to say your writing took my breath away.. lol my fingers dont know what to say
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awww how terribly sad. obviously you cant wait forever, but sometimes the one who loves you most is worth waiting for, because it takes them a while ti realize what you are to them. limit yourself from him and then he will realize it..
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omg, i so wanna send this to my ex.
by the way, you sound like such a frickn' awesome person form yer profile info ^^ congrats to you fer being so rad. lol.
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Haha thanks. Heh, I havn't heard anybody use the word 'rad' in ages. You seem pretty cool 2
Omg, I love Robot Chicken!! lol, random....
~lae
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Hun....
he isn't worth it if he doesn't want you. Such a good write 
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I HeLLa KnO hOw U fEeL!!kUz DaTs HoW iM fEeLiN rItE nOw!!....DiS wAs A rEaLy GuD wrItE!!i LuVd It!!
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I don't know if it's because these are my feelings exactly of the moment- but I love this poem.
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Yes
it's incredible what one person can do to you isn't it? how much passion can occur and hate...love is pain. i enjoyed your poem
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