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This Fire We Started Made Wreckage Of All That We Know

One small spark
Of anger, sadness of pain
Set our relationship ablaze

Burning whiter by the hour
As our love crumbled
Leaving only ashes

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anyone relate

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 25, 2008

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    I quite understand this poem

    this so much reminds me of my fucken ex I hate alot. I bene battling her for well over the past 8 months and well shes finally gone away after drilling the point home but UGH! any ways a very good sharp spoken well penned shortly done poem with a kick ass long killer title any ways a well penned poem though. I can relate to it in everyway. keep up the good work =)


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 24, 2008
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