Shooting stars
and passing cars
and trees covering the lane
seems so far
from where I've come
so how am I the same
sitting on my rooftop
looking out to sea
listening to the church bells
perfect harmony
but restless winds roll through my soul
no matter where I run
Author notes
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I think you've found your calling - your lyrics are all so nice. Keep this one going too. Can't wait to see the completely finished version.
Hugs and love to ya,
Grampa

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I really enjoyed reading this, even though it is unfinished. It was simply lovely


