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*restless* unfinished

Shooting stars
and passing cars
and trees covering the lane

seems so far
from where I've come
so how am I the same

sitting on my rooftop
looking out to sea
listening to the church bells
perfect harmony

but restless winds roll through my soul
no matter where I run

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  • delayedscreening
    August 29, 2008
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    2 days left

    finish?


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    August 20, 2008

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    I think you've found your calling - your lyrics are all so nice. Keep this one going too. Can't wait to see the completely finished version.

    Hugs and love to ya,
    Grampa

  • tigress3737
    August 20, 2008
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    I really enjoyed reading this, even though it is unfinished. It was simply lovely