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raindrops glistening

The look in your eyes
The pain in your face
The touch of your skin
The step to your pace

Makes me wonder why you picked me
out of all the others
it's cold outside, I'm missing you
so I hide under the covers

and read despite its books I hate
and it's you that I really love
I haven't told you yet, my darling sun
'fore it has just begun

There's raindrops glistening on my window sill
and my chocolate has begin to steam
You tell me you're coming to see me tomorrow
and my eyes shine with gleam

I miss you always, right now, tomorrow
I missed you yesterday
You leave me speechless, I stutter, babe
I've got nothing more to say

Come away with me darling
lay beside me in my bed
let's fall asleep before it's dusk
let me gently rub your head

I'll kiss you like no one has kissed you before
and then I'll speak these shallow words
I love, I love, I love you dear
so much that it's quite absurd.

hit it. lemme know what u think.

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  • BitterDreamer
    September 16, 2008

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    aww.the last stanza just great.
    actually my boyfriend and I just had a conversation that sounded just like that. we love each other too much and we're so lovey dovey that it's quite crazy. But that's what love does to you!! yahhh..GREAT JOB!


    • FalopianTube
      September 16, 2008
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      really? omg that's crazy! lol.
      thank you sooo much for your comments, though!!!

      love does..

      it makes u... weird lol