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My intense love

My intense love
burns only for you
I sit longing for your voice
By the window ceil

The rain droping down
Thinking of only you
Your smile, your hair

Your lustful bright brown eyes

like a giant burst of love purified

they shine with a gleam of love no other set of eyes could possably try to obtain

Thinking in my room
Only of you
my Intense love
Burns only for you

I love you

Author notes

I wrote this for a friend to give to his GF

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  • xXmidnightstarXx
    August 22, 2008

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    OMG! I LOVE THIS! OMG OMG OMG! this is great and it's like.. a happy poem.


  • DeSiBoO14
    August 20, 2008
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    Aw..dIs s KuTe!!I lYkD iT aLoT!!...