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Out of Ink

I’ve put this pen to paper
A million times it seems
No inspiration comes to me
Of love, or hope, or dreams.

There are no lovely visions,
Of flowers first in bloom,
Nor dark ones of monsters
Creeping through the room.

No inspiration springs from heart
That has been strangled,
Of ache, of pain and brokenness.
I’ve studied every angle.

I’ve put this pen to paper
But all it does is scratch,
Draws circle after circle,
And nones a perfect match.

I’ve searched my mind endlessly
But I can’t seem to think,
Guess like this pen in hand
It’s just run out of ink.





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  • JustFallingApart
    August 23, 2008
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    i loved this!!! it was great, nice write


  • The Hidden Darkness
    August 22, 2008
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    brilliant!!

    this was an amazing look at writer's block!!!! great work here, this was splendid!!!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Wow--This is excellent--A great take on the prompt and an excellent contest entry.
    I think most writers have felt this way at times--I know, I have!!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!


  • basilisk
    August 20, 2008
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    Excellent description of a writer's block. The last stanza is a great simile!