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You're the Needle, I'm the Thread

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Passion is woven between heart and soul,
each stitch simply combines your heart to mine.
Within the threads seem to lose its control,
becoming frayed, tattered, brittle, fine.

As each loop seals another one tighter,
a tender knot may try and hold us down.
Your the needle, I'm the thread, a true fighter,
combined with strength, a life anew was found.

Every new path of the needle and thread,
will lead us in direction of sweet love.
So gather up the loose ends off pains bed,
together we'll weave with strength from above.

So through the eye I slide, then loop around,
firm in grip your held, I won't let you down.

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by poeticweaver


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  • Swan song gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    I like your sonnets and the way you view things in much of your poetry and as always very very sensual


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    great write

    like usual your talent shines my friend.


  • esroddo silver member
    August 20, 2008
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    Outstanding write

    As always, so well enjoyed, good luck LISA


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Stitched together beautifully but why is Timothy posting a needle and thread picture, shouldn't it be warp and weft?

    Great stuff


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Bravo on a wonderfully penned sonnet for the given pic prompt!
    Thanks for your talented entry, and this read
    Very creative, and lots of great imagery here for sure!

    Much love V~
    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Well done another fine job you've done. Good luck in the contest. Boog


  • Griswold silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Wonderfully written for Timothy honey. I know he will love it. Best of luck to you. Love you...Scott


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Bravo!

    This was a great take on the prompt. Best wishes to you in the contest


  • Volfeng
    August 19, 2008

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    Very nice my love, remembered the bunnies this time

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