Memories of love, sadness, and anger
Past years mistakes
Have I learned my lessons?
From the cuts the tears
And leaning on others for help
Feeling of loneliness was always with me...
Yet I felt like not giving up
I wanted to fight no matter what
The guy I loved left with my best friend
Yet I still did not give up
I try to move on
But the tears wouldn’t stop
And I cried myself to sleep
The love I had for him was no longer
It was anger that controlled me
I had to find peace within the blade
The blood that was a beautiful as snow to me...
I took all of my emotions and bottled them
I showed no smile to anyone
And tears would not fall
I walked alone
Trust was not in my heart anymore
Love was something that would save me
Yet no one would come
All would judge, criticize...
They had no right
Running with all my might
I had nothing at home
Yet the dream I have
The dream within that I will always have
I will protect no matter what
A contest entry
- Personaly experiences by Ntagatf.
500 points, ended August 31, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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wow.
this poem was so great.
it was very touching
i know exactly how you feel,
AWESOME job.
& keep writing
-Aimee
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my god. i have been there as well. more than once. i feel for you. having to go through this is some thing that takes great strength. if you cannot lean on any one keep writting. get those emotions out. great job!!
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Great Job!
you've done an amazing job on this. People who dont cut dont really understand what we get out of it, Its easier to deal with physical pain rather than emotional pain. You've described this with 2 of the most common emotions, Anger and Depression. Thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! Keep up the great work!
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