kitchen scurry
flick switch splatter
pregnant roach
Author notes
GUEST ENTRY...
Inspired by : Woman Poem by Nikki Giovanni
"joy is finding a pregnant roach
and squashing it"
A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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roaches unborn
under PK's shoes
sticky bugs
slimy imagery your haiku provides
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Your imagery made me itchy (the thought of insects always does that)! I put cockroaches and centipedes in the same category (the quicker I do away with them, the better!). They should have a universe of their own, far removed from mine!
Your haiku, although it brings back unpleasant memories, is very effective in producing a knee-jerk reaction, so, for that alone, I give you a 'thumbs up' on this one!
Best of Luck in this contest!
<3 Maureen
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Killer of Millions!
Ex-pregnant
Expressing expectorant
exacerbates!
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EWWWW I hate cockroaches..creepy crawley creatures come crawling constantly creating certain cake crumbs crumbling completely.
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Hi Peteskid!
Mariza warned me this was coming so I composed a special uniku (a one-syllable haiku expressing feelings, sentiments, deep emotion or reaction to natural disaster)
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YYYUKKK!
ROACH-LOVERS of the WORLD - UNITE!!
Applause and WELCOME.
Hugh (R.)
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Well, unlike the bug...
i do feel quite welcome!!!
PK
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ha ha ha...this was wonderful imaging...
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Yemish influence!
A shocking tale of horror, indeed.
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Yikes!!! Could almost hear that 'crisp' sound of foot on roach
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Our King is very precise with details
Thanks for the images that just spoiled my breakfast
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hilarious. and disgusting.
perfect.
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