You entered my life, like a fine fiber of hope.
Filling the cylindrical hole with magic.
You threaded my life like no other before.
Slowly weaving your warming heart.
One stitch at a time with mine.
Mending that emptiness, so profound within.
With that intertwined love I was longing for.
Making that prefect hem across my soul.
Creating an intense feeling of deep affection.
Filling that loneliness with a thin strand of love.
You entered my life, like a fine fiber of hope.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Inspired!!! by poeticweaver.
1000 points, ended August 22, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I see why you wre the honorable winner here,should have won gold.I like the way you expressed yourself in this and it gives great promise and hope.Great job and I am glad that I got the chance to read this.
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I LOVE IT!
You go. This poem is so deep it really makes me think. -
I LOVE THIS! This is one of the best poems I've read lately... I would have given you gold dear... You've created something so beautiful here. I love how you stuck with the two themes of love, and thread all throughout the poem! Amazing job, well done!
"Making that prefect hem across my soul.
Creating an intense feeling of deep affection.
Filling that loneliness with a thin strand of love."
-- Just beautiful!
Amber
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Beautifully Inscribed!
What a wonderful write you've created with the pic prompt!
Thanks so much my friend for sharing here in my contest.
I'm blessed to know you, and read your wonderful works!
Peace, Timothy
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