From the embers
Comes a passion
So hot
Sweat pours forth
Drowning you
Dimming your perceptions
There's no love
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Nice write. I kind of felt this could be taken in two ways. One which is based on the title and the concept of deception. Another angle is hitting on the idea that infatuation should not be confused with love and that despite a physical attraction one should recognize when his/her perceptions have been dimmed and they are not seeing clearly, and when it is true love. Just a thought I had reading it. Nice write.
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very good insight. it's both, actually.
see, you're better than you thought! 
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You have very vivid imagery in this. I enjoyed how it is short and sweet but still says so much. I like the metaphore too
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