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Joseph's Coat

Missing image
Tightly woven strands
passing through time's frame.
Each unique.
Alone each  fragile.
Together knitting
in universal bonds,
the colored tapestry of life.

Author notes

Pic:Artist Unknown.

Rambling thoughts on a slow night....

A contest entry

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  • Leonura
    November 3, 2008
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    Such a wonderful poem on life. truly enjoyable.


    • Rclane gold member
      November 4, 2008
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      Thank you for the time invested in reading and commenting on these ramblings


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Very Well Penned!

    Short and creative!
    Thanks for sharing your talent here, shine on!

    -Timothy


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Beautifully written

    This is a work of art, very well done, one suggestion don't change a thing. Bravo Good luck in the contest not that you need luck. Thank you for sharing, Boog


    • Rclane gold member
      August 20, 2008
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      Thank you for such kind support. I'm glad you found enjoyment in the read.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Beautifully done

    good luck to you in the

    contest

     

    Love

    Passions


    • Rclane gold member
      August 20, 2008
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      Thank you for your time in reading and commenting on my ramblings.

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