I wanted to have a perfect relationship.
It took me eleven years to find you.
For ten years I was a wanderer.
It was a painful wandering.
People get love without effort
but I had to put efforts after efforts.
More effort I put more possessive I became.
Then in two thousand seven
my eleventh year started.
Till October I tried to convince you.
I wrote countless poems in this allpoetry site
and I showed more patience than I had.
More poems I wrote more possessive I became.
Then came the happy November day
The day you accepted my proposal
or the day I tasted my first French kiss with you.
In the Two Thousand Eight February day when we got married
All these are happy memories.
More happy memories I have more possessive I became.
As there are shadows in the light
there are few sadness in our very happy life.
Sometimes I hurt you for my possessiveness,
which I do not want to do.
My love struggle was so long
that I want to see my shadow
in every field of your life.
Few times we misunderstood each other
but the fact remains we always love each other.
Author notes
I am dedicating this poem to my darling wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq (I love you my darling Queen).By grace of Allah we got married on 27 February 2008.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thats very sweet, and even though it took you awhile to find that special person, atleast you're now complete with your other half! This is a beautiful write, thank you for entering my contest, good luck. And keep up the great work! -
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