As tears pour from my eyes
burdens yet to completely heave
become disentangled within
my heart, frayed, in my core.
My inner sanctum, snarled
beyond the eyes can envision,
in search for hoped promises;
tangled in caverns of my being.
Woven within the strands of my soul;
stitched together in arms embrace,
a spirit once crumbled and torn
now held by the threads of peace.
Author notes
PROMPT:
Contest picture prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Inspired!!! by poeticweaver.
1000 points, ended August 22, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW! this is fantastic! I think this one that I know only too well, as I have been there, alot lately. What a great job you did on this one!
Congrats on the HM
and love
Nyetta
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This is a fine piece of poetry you have written
The imagery and rhythm is splendid
Congradulation's on the shiny.
Tony
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well constructed piece with carefully but seamlessly placed words to bind them to the prompt image. great job and best wishes in the contest.
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Excellent Sis-Star
What a very powerful piece for the picture prompt!
I really like what you've wrote here poetess sis.
Thanks for your entry, and all the best to you.
Brother Timothy
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Nice job
A very well penned tale of sadness. "tangled in caverns of my being" gives a huge empty feeling of hopelessness and abondenment. Good luck in the contest, Boog
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Wonderfully penned sister. May this touch the heart strings of our mr weaver and grace his existence with peace.
This is truly a blessing
Love
Tory
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