Some days give themselves to me and others tease me.
I still win, I will win, until I fall into the loneliness of death.
I am a very old pirate:
When I turn the wheel
I am not searching for gold.
I’m looking for an impossible place called,
Infinity and it’s right next door to insignificance!
But I have saved her eyes for last,
In there I know I will find the place
where mind and womb are one!
Is that "one" enough?
Please tell me what you think
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Yes !
Hi Blade...This is awesome. I look forward to reading a lot more in the future.
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this is a very well penned poem, it is a very nice poem to read doesnt take too much thought and overuse of the brain
i love it alot, all my love
kitty xxx -
Great job
This is a wonderful piece an old pirate are you sometimes I feel that same way. Great write, Boog
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"Some days give themselves to me and others tease me.
I still win, I will win, until I fall into the loneliness of death." were my two favorite lines along with the last stanza and your question. This is the kind of poem that gets you thinking and I like that.
Thanks for commenting "Aden".
--Aden
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who says death has to be lonely?
when i go... i am taking as many as possible with me...
j/k
one is enough if you are complete within yourself
i liked this
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In this poem
I see a soulful person, I love poetry that often
leaves a person wondering.Great Write !
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wow this is so beautiful, I loved the last stanza and the question afterwards. Makes you think and contemplate what you just said. Wonderful write I loved it. Thanks for your comment on my piece
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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