I jump into a freezing lake
To cleanse my filthy thoughts,
But the scars of your invasion
Won't seem to wash away.
They linger like a hurricane
Waiting to swallow me whole,
And all you can do is stand there and watch
And make the storm scar deeper.
You've made me broken, false and impure
And the only remorse you feel
Is that I wasn't good enough.
I couldn't please your lust.
The coldness of your searing hatred
Brands all that I have left.
Once the innocence of a child remained,
But now burns inflict regret.
I can feel you in my dreams,
You're haunting like a shadow.
The fear you bring lingers on
Long after I've thrown you away.
The thoughts of you pull me under.
I'm drowning in the lake,
All because you made me trust you
And give you everything I had.
And all you can do is stand there and watch
And let the storm destroy me.
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littlewhitepills
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i know how ya feel..
love in people, besides certain friends and family members, can bring misery to those who look for it..but love in God will bring you peace of mind, heart, and soul..
Wonder Write,
God Bless,
ZeInkslinger
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Very good. Explains a very very stupid relationship I got into once... He made me like him then he ditched me for my friend... We slowly becoming friends though now
Anyway, great write and thanks for entering -
Very good. Explains a very very stupid relationship I got into once... He made me like him then he ditched me for my friend... We slowly becoming friends though now
Anyway, great write and thanks for entering -
this flowed nicely and the metaphores were great. It was so sad yet very well written. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for sharing
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