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Tired Of Living This Life

I'm tired of so many things
So many things I could
Never change if I tried

I am tired of him,
Always letting me down
By making promises only to destroy them

I am tired of the doubts
Why God why do you not want me with him?
I thought he was meant for me?

I am so tired of losing the ones I love
It's been three months
But I still remember that fateful crash

I am tired of hurting
Where is that happiness
I once knew?

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I don't think I can be helped.

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  • yellowflower61 gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Ultra honest

    I hate consolations out of mercy. You may be correct in that no-one can help you. But one day you might get tired of being tired. Your heart is as much part of the Nature as the heart of the person you love(d). Both are the same. You will not see this in shallow waters of the bla bla lake and puddles of expectations. Why not hit the rock bottom of the ocean of silence and solitude? Why not find your deepest self and see where it will lead you?


  • ZeInkslinger
    August 19, 2008

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    Wonderful Write!
    awh..im sorry Molly!
    *hugs times a gillion*
    Ill be praying for you Molly.
    much love and God Bless,
    K


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    I will spare you the pep talk and just offer you my


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Its not cleche at all

    Many people feel hurt and blame him for their loss and its the pain from within talking . No one can say why things happen the way they do but he wasnt driving either of the vehicles so how could it be his fault . We in our lifetime have to remember none of us can stop what happens within this world .We have to love while we can and know we had the best and loved like there is no tomorrow for it happens just tat way . The first year my husband and I were married we wee hit head on by a drunk driver and it messed me up really bad .I found out later I couldnt have children from that one split second my family was taken from us to never see or hear them play . I didnt blame God for this it was truly the doings of the young man drinking and driving that caused this horrible heartbreak . Now you must know it will take some time before you find your way but you will find the way and you will love again and your new love will be just as exciting and caring as the one you lost .Life doesnt end for us who remains behind but I o believe those who are called home are watching and they want us to be loving and haveing the reason for joy about us every day . So come on honey I know its hard and often lonely but believe me you will find the way and you will love again and be the mother I could never be please do this for me .


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 19, 2008

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    Deeply Penned

    I must say my beautiful sweet Molly that this was a very well penned deep poem too. itsa hard to write about things that happen in the past and well things that still affect you to this very day. I can understand completely about getitng over someone and why it hurts so much then questioning God why do we exist and fele such pain ect. I don't know that answer myself but I came to terms with merely accepting this as the flaw of society itself. any ways a well penned deep poem that was short and yet sweet. keep up the good work an always remember ya got me on your side even though I am always in the shadows good luck with this contest. Me =)

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